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| At the Pool drawn Aug 8 '05 posted for June 6, 2007 (188) It's in the Moshou no Nazo (Fire Emblem 1, I believe) gallery. The walking people are Marth, Roy, Link, Rana, and Zelda. Lilina (looking ugly) and Sheeda are already in the pool. I draw such short legs. Rrr. Nice sunglasses, though. Link's got the fairies in his hat. His head is flat. I think Roy thinks he's Superman or something. ^_^7 More Eirika has gone up, the rest of it because I had time, and I realized that there was a hole in Chapter 11 (which is the one with Innes, not 10, sorry). I forgot to write the conversation between Seth and Eirika. If there were holes in the preceeding chapters, I'll fix them now. And, wow! Their self-denial lasted a grand total of two chapters and less than a week! Still, I must stress that neither of them are hormone-powered monsters, but decent, unhormonal people. And calling the Elder "Grandmother" is a Japanese thing to do. Rennac is funny; I like him ("NO! I said I don't want to!"). Oh, the famous, overworked Scorched Sand chapter... die, Valter! But, hey, Chapter 19 I think came out rather well. By that time I had definitely wised up as to 'how to use script'; as in, not to! It's a framework, but if I write my own words, the story comes across much, much better, and it's 'in my voice', as I suppose some experts would say. What's up with Chapter 21? Can it be called a chapter? I have no idea! I guess I had no inspiration, since there was no romance appropriate, not much interesting type fighting, not much character development opportunity at all. Sorry. I guess I could expand it with some sort of Seth-Eirika stuff, or some of her observations of the spirits of random individuals in the army, or something. I forgot to mention yesterday that May Ling is too nice. Disc Drive is the greatest! |
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