O Canada
Official
words
(
My changes )
Our home and native land
True patriot love in all thy ( children's
) sons command.
With glowing hearts we see thee rise,
The True North strong and free
From far and wide,
O Canada, we stand on guard for thee.
God (
Let us ) keep our land glorious
and free
O Canada, we stand on guard for thee.
O Canada, we stand on guard for thee.
I move to change these words sons and God for children's and Let us . So it reflects open mindedness and responsibility .
What do you think ?